Peer feedback

Peer feedback

I think this page is really great! I think you have great examples and pictures to back up your topic. I would love for you to elaborate further on the "culture not costume" as I believe it applies not only to Indian culture (which is your topic), but to other cultures as well (Aboriginals is another idea). I think that showing that "culture not costume" is a bigger movement than just to Indians showcases the lack of cultural appropriation in other countries as well.

Because your topic is on Cultural Appropriation in Indian culture, maybe relay back to why it effects Indian culture/how are these two relevant (for example, Cultural Appropriation in the West/Negative Connotations Associated with Cultural Appropriation).

Overall, I think this is a great draft to your wiki page! Just some minor tweaks to make it even greater!

MaiAnhHoang (talk)00:15, 10 November 2017

Thanks for your comments and suggestions!

GagandeepCheema (talk)20:42, 16 November 2017