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Hey!

I believe your page on women in STEM is off to a great start! One positive thing in your work to note was the clarity in your writing. For example the leaky pipeline was well defined as well as clear to point out how the stereotypes of women in the STEM workforce are problematic and untrue. One thing that I believe you could add to your presentation is clear examples. If you were to add references and statistics with the studies that you mention I believe it would strengthen your page!

Great start!