Peer Review

Peer Review

Hi there!

I absolutely love the topic that you chose for this Wiki as it is such a relevant and prevalent issue! I would definitely recommend utilizing headings to organize your material as it is a little difficult to follow at the minute, though I assume you are likely still in the process of formatting your page. Similarly, it would be very beneficial to have your references cited at the end of each applicable sentence, in order to discern where the information is coming from. In regards to the content, I would suggest including a section on how gender plays a role in the medicalization of mental illness in order to provide a comprehensive and intersectional analysis. For example, there is a wealth of literature about hysteria, an unfounded psychological disorder, and the incredibly discriminatory medicalization of the illness that lead to the false treatment, detainment, and subsequent marginalization of countless women that you may wish to discuss!

Overall, I think you have established a really wonderful foundation and I am excited to see your final piece!

TaylynJameson (talk)06:23, 23 March 2018