Peer Review

Hello,

I think you have a great start to your Wiki page. You gave a clear definition of the main terms, which helps the readers understand your research. I also like how you incorporated issues of race and gender in your research as it demonstrates the intersectionality portion of the course. Overall, you seem to be on the right track with your Wiki page! Some suggestions that I have for you is to section out your page prior to doing the research and prior to writing your draft since it may be easier to help organize your thoughts. Also, it may be helpful to look into treatments that aren’t medicalized and how certain mental illnesses can be treated without the help from medicine or doctors. This research will help support why the process of medicalization is not necessary in all cases of mental illnesses. Other things you can look into include the process that mental illness was medicalized and how it has evolved since then. Good luck!