Comments on "Hegemonic Masculinity"

Hello,

I enjoyed reading your article - it was very insightful and informative. As this is still a work in progress, I think there should also be a little of a background as to why hockey has been traditionally classified as a sport that reinforces hegemonic masculinity, perhaps also provide some historical background on it as well. I also think that you should leave out the "I" statements on your wikipedia page, as it is meant to be a page in a large encyclopedia of information, not a journal article or a blog entry. Overall, this wikipedia page is a great start.