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This looks like it is well organized and you are set up to get your point across. I think it would definitely be important to look into wage-gaps in different countries or regions of the world, since obviously there is no one answer. I also think it would be useful to elaborate on why the gap exists and explore the different factors that can contribute to the gap such as sociocultural factors, ethnic backgrounds, religion, education levels and may more. This is a great topic and is of much concern in a lot of societies so I think it was a great choice.