Terminology suggestion

Terminology suggestion

Just as a quick note, I found your article interesting, however the early mention of "the movement" seemed quite vague and didn't really help pin down your argument's relevance to feminism. Consider replacing this with more specific terminology that aligns your opening description with feminism and contemporary feminist movements. This would really help support your opening information, and back up the extensive data you later reference. I like your data based approach!

BrynShaffer (talk)06:56, 2 December 2017

Hi, I enjoyed reading your wiki article. I think your paragraph about men saying "ladies first" is an interesting component to being up when talking about gender equality because it incorporates history into the feminist movement. Personally, I do not find anything wrong with the comment "ladies first" because there is nothing stopping women from changing history and saying "men first" when opening a door or such; possibly that will be a good comment to add? - that not all women think the phrase is bad? I think it is important to note possibly where the phrase arose from as well. - Nancy Andrews

NancyAndrews (talk)16:19, 2 December 2017