October assignment feedback 2

Thank you for your feedback. I've updated the page and implemented the changes based on your suggestions, particularly focusing on resolving grammatical and stylistic issues. Regarding the inconsistencies in the channel-mixing sub-block formulas, I've kept the original naming as it appears in the paper to maintain accuracy.

In response to Dr. Poole's feedback and to enhance the article's clarity, I've removed the section related to EMAT. As for using WKV, it involves matrix multiplication, where altering the order of vectors impacts the output, making it unfeasible to change. Apart from these points, I've revised the remaining sections as per your comments.

Regarding your suggestion to use shorter captions for figures, I'd like to note that while it's common practice in research papers, it's less common on Wiki pages, especially given the limitations of not being able to link from the text to the images.