Critique

Overall a good project, each component is explained clearly and the objective is clear. I agree with Sarah's opinion that gender analysis seems to need more motivation. I appreciate the VAE justifications as well as the derivation. The approach to these hypotheses is very nice and the table is clear. Some of the sections can be ordered a bit differently as rn a lot of the sections are unstructured and doesn't have a nice logical flow. I would break it into more sections with subsections. minor edits:

  • an user's -> a user's
  • hypothesis -> hypotheses
YilinYang (talk)06:01, 21 April 2023