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Hi Jordon,

Thank you for your very insightful feedback. I will work on my page and solve the problems you mentioned. I will rearrange my page. I thought we should read the 2 papers and develop a page about the concept in the same format of the previous page we developed. So rearranging would help a lot. I will change the images into math format and add some citations. and remove all the duplicity and redundancies. And explain in more detail that which paper contributed to which parts. and add a legend kind of thing for the formulas. Thank you again!

Cheers,

Mehrdad Ghomi

MehrdadGhomi (talk)21:01, 12 March 2016