small suggestion

small suggestion

Hey Mariko,

Just a small thing, the wording of this sentence seems a bit odd to me:

Finally, repressive regimes can destroy these records they have created in order to erase any proof of their deeds.

I would change “can” to “may,” “these” to “the,” and “deeds” to “misdeeds” so that it reads:

Finally, repressive regimes may destroy the records they have created in order to erase any proof of their misdeeds.

KathrynN (talk)04:58, 31 March 2013

Thanks, Kathryn. I appreciate it! I hope you're okay with me plagiarizing your work :)

Makazuta (talk)06:55, 31 March 2013