Course talk:PHYS341/2018/project/jazz

Physics Content: The source-filter theory section was very strong as you provided the physics background on how vocals work and clearly explained the concept. I think the Vowels and Formants section was also explained well, but it could be expanded on a bit as I felt it was a little short at the moment. I think adding some more physics-focused content to this section could improve your page.

Clear Explanations: The page was easy to follow and I thought all explanations were clear and concise. I especially appreciated your use of examples (particularly in the Scatting section), as they added deeper meaning and made the content more relevant. Good job!

Structure and Length: The structure of your wiki flows nicely and contains all the required sections. I believe you are slightly under the minimum required words at around 940 words. Maybe expanding on one of the shorter sections (such as the Improvisation section or Formants section) would be a good idea.

Writing Style: Good, clear writing style. There are some grammatical/spelling errors throughout but only a few and they will be easy to correct. (ex. "...it thus causes //that object// to vibrate at that same frequency" – not sure if this is grammatically incorrect or an appropriate stylistic choice?).

Diagrams and Photographs: You have both diagrams and photos in your paper. The photo isn't an original photo though, so you will get only 1 mark for that. Also make sure that your photographs/diagrams are cited if they were not created by you.