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Hi, I think that this is such an interesting topic because personally it can be relatable with most people with social media. I think it's a strong topic where you can also mention the manipulation of technology and society's learned dependence on social media and how it is shaping how we think and act. This topic reminded me of the story of Essenia O'Neill who was an Instagram famous star who quit social media and revealed all the harsh realties of her posts and how she felt about it and who is now an activist against it (https://www.theguardian.com/media/2015/nov/03/instagram-star-essena-oneill-quits-2d-life-to-reveal-true-story-behind-images). Also I really like how you categorized your information and the sections you made. Good luck on the rest of your project :)