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Hi,

It would be helpful in the beginning to include an overview or summary of what the entire page is talking about or will discuss. I think that for the sections of benefits and challenges you could maybe condense the topic into general ideas or themes that are subheads and discuss each one in more detail and expand on your ideas and some of the ideas brought up by the course. This is a really interesting topic that I think is very relatable for a majority of students at UBC and in Vancouver in general because of everyone's different background.

Good luck with the rest of your page! Christina

ChristinaFung (talk)00:21, 29 November 2017