Peer Feedback 2018

Peer Feedback 2018

The information presented on the page covers all the main points that should be made inclusive. However a good key idea that is missing might be specific cases of missing women or even pictures/videos that might support what is being explained under each of the titles. History of aboriginal people could also be made/split into subtitles such as residential schools, main discrimination and prejudice events etc. Moreover, the downtown east side topic representing indigenous women has many supporting articles and book that could be used in this case. The more references, equals to more evidence which may make the whole wiki look more presentable and reliable. Apart from those points being made, the overall page looks good so far!

PhraewaLimviphuwat (talk)01:45, 24 March 2018

Thanks Phraewa! I agree- I will be doing some more digging for sure.

AlexandraMiller (talk)01:59, 24 March 2018