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You chose a very interesting topic and I think you did a great job of explaining everything. I am not sure if you are still working on this or not, but as a reminder I would suggest putting references in the end. Instead of having them as part of the body as you do now, I would recommend putting them in at the end. To do this just click on the reference button when you edit the page and insert your reference wherever needed. And then at the bottom of the page you just add and it’ll create a list for you. Like I said before, I am not sure if you are still working on the page or not. But if not, I would suggest making the social impact, political impact, and the role of the individual part as separate sections because right now it looks like it is all part of the introduction and that it is missing that middle section of the page. Other than that the page looks great! You did an amazing job of clearly explaining everything. You are surely headed in the right direction!